Since then I've been trying to write a story based on that one sentence. I wrote about ten different versions but I liked none of them becasue they all, however long or short they were, got bogged down in the jargon of time travel and veered away from that central, nihilistic point. So tonight I tried to just capture that hopelessness in under one hundred words - and its my favourite draft (and I stress draft on purpose) so far. If nothing else, it's been a fun little exercise in getting to the core of a story. So here it is: 'The Sum of It All'...
The Sum of It All
In the far future, at the end of the Humankind, there was nothing left but a tin of peaches.
Peterson’s Peach Segments in Syrup. Best before end 1990.
Nothing else.
The Time Traveller stood in the dirt of an Earth stripped bare of everything and stared at the battered tin.
And then, because he couldn’t stand what he saw, and what it meant for the hope of humanity, and because he couldn’t face the strain of telling everyone the truth when he travelled back home...
...he shot himself right there. Next to last and only remnant of all Human endeavour.
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