An example of one that needs a lot of work in every area. Come to think of it, I'm not sure why I put this one up: I'm not happy with the pic for some reason (I think it looks a little bland), and the tag-line is waaaay too clunky. There's a reasonable joke in there somewhere, but it needs to be sanded and polished. If you've got any suggestions, then do let me know.
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